screaming until the world fractures
and comes apart
(every seam breaks)
the dark leaks drips forces through the cracks
filling in
the low places, and rising
(the dark is rising)
higher
and colder than the ring of
shrieks on ice
(muffled like snowfall)
the breaking of this lost world
ends trembling
rimmed in dawn.
I'm out of practice at this writing thing. Severely. Also, it is a terrible, terrible idea to drink Coke just before bedtime. No trouble getting to sleep, but I dreamed all night and woke up drenched in sweat from a particularly nasty little nightmare. I blame the Coke.
3 comments:
I'm sorry about your nightmare. I have a very old kitty here with me, helping me type. She says hello.
They say the same thing happens with chocolate if you eat it before you go to bed. So dont have that and coke or you might have a terrible nightmare. I thought your writing was good :) keep writing!
http://writeasrain-mohosuru.blogspot.com/2012/03/this-is-huge-news.html
Just in case you missed it.
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