Tuesday, March 29, 2011

Awkward Allegory

He had an unfortunate affinity for metal.

Oh, it wasn't as if he wanted it--he'd just been born that way. Metallic things were attracted to him. It was as if there were a thousand tiny magnets beckoning under his skin, a homing beacon for lost bits of metal. He never asked for it--it just happened. But he thought the pieces were unique and beautiful in their own way. and for the longest time, he didn't realize how different he was.

As he got older, he began to notice that there weren't very many people who walked around with shiny bits and pieces hanging from their arms. At first, he felt a little special, and proud that he was different from all but a few other individuals. People complimented him on his ability to carry around so many pieces of metal. The problem was that, while they all said how good he was to do so, nobody ever offered to take some of it off and carry it themselves. They always looked relieved as they walked away, leaving him alone with his metal.

And he got tired of carrying the full weight of the metal pieces. They were heavy, and they took time and effort to work around. At the end of especially long and crowded days, he was exhausted by dragging them after him. However, when he tried to get rid of them, to separate them from himself and become his own person, it was a painful process, and they invariably found their way back.

So he walked around with all of these shiny metal pieces hugging his skin. Now, when people would look at them and say, "How nice!", he just gritted his teeth and wished with all of his heart that things were different.

8 comments:

Alyssa said...

My creative writing bit for the day.

I dare each and every one of you to venture a guess as to what I'm talking about.

Kylander said...

I don't know you anywhere near well enough to guess, but, SINCE you dared me lol um........nah, never mind. I have no clue lol. capcha says 'liteche' so we'll go with that :P . I love the first line of this (the rest of it too, but especially that line).

Becca said...

i gottt ittttt

Becca said...

did i say it already?
I GOTTT ITTTTT

Robby Van Arsdale said...

I'm guessing that you have a friend who is annoyed at being talented. At everything.

There, I said it. There's no taking it back. BUT that's got a 7% chance of being right.

anelles47 said...

I have a few guesses. It sounds like empathy, but it also sounds like talent (Robby's guess), but it also sounds like trying to care about too many causes at once.

Alyssa said...

Of course you got it, Bec.

(Bec has been my best friend since...well, ever, I guess. I might not have know it since ever, but it's true, nontheless).

Well, I can't tell you guys what I'm really talking about...but the guesses were good. Janelle was the closest with empathy.

anelles47 said...

Thanks. Good luck with that. it sounds difficult.