She didn't get angry often, but when she did, it was very quiet. Her lips compressed, eyes dilated, nostrils flared. It was like all the rage in the world was held back behind those eyes. When she did speak, the words bit, like ice scalds on bare skin. It was frightening, that fury. She just walked into a room and it felt as if the entire world was burning.
Afterwards, she was fragile, like fine gray ash barely held together after a fire sweeps through.
I used to stare at her in the mirror and not recognize a thing.
Bec used to describe me this way when I was angry. Got to thinking about it the other night. So, I haven't lost my temper in a long, long time; it's just my creative writing bit for the day.
Also, this picture has nothing to do with it, but I was searching for some kind of illustration and this is sort of cool, even if it doesn't quite work.
It would be fun to write a story from this picture.
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I would love to see a story from this picture.
This description is very well done, by the way. I recognized it instantly, if that makes any sense.
It's like . . . the fox lit her on fire or is standing by her through it, or something . . . hmm.
This is nice, you revealing parts of yourself. I like knowing about people's personality. Makes me feel better...connected or something. like with the puddle thing too. I like these. and yes, the pic is cool so who cares lol. I have to make a really bad joke though just on the chance that robby will read this comment.
....firefox....:P
(also, where is everybody? I'm hardly ever the first comment lol. this makes two in a row :P )
ok, I swear Janelle's comment wasn't there when I typed that lol. now I look dumb since I wasn't first :P oh well lol.
(hahahahahaha. omg no way. You can't make this crap up. the captcha is epic.
"Igrabuts" XD)
Aah KYLE WHY
And I have to confess: I used to have the most tremendously outrageous temper. Sadly, nobody ever described what I looked like because I buried it so long ago that nobody ever had the gift of description when I was angry.
Anyway. Good luck being happy!
Nice PIX
ssr,india
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